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		<title>Tips From The Masters</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 31 Jul 2009 22:10:50 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[I found this list of tips with quotes from famous writers &#8212; good for both laughs and insight.

Cut the boring parts
I try to leave out the parts that people skip.  ~Elmore Leonard

Eliminate unnecessary words
Substitute “d***” every time you’re inclined to write “very;” your editor will delete it and the writing will be just as [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I found this list of tips with quotes from famous writers &#8212; good for both laughs and insight.</p>
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<li><strong>Cut the boring parts</strong><br />
<blockquote><p>I try to leave out the parts that people skip.  ~Elmore Leonard</p></blockquote>
</li>
<li><strong>Eliminate unnecessary words</strong><br />
<blockquote><p>Substitute “d***” every time you’re inclined to write “very;” your editor will delete it and the writing will be just as it should be. ~Mark Twain</p></blockquote>
</li>
<li><strong>Write with passion</strong><br />
<blockquote><p>Fill your paper with the breathings of your heart.  ~William Wordsworth</p></blockquote>
</li>
<li><strong>Paint a picture</strong></li>
<blockquote><p>Don’t tell me the moon is shining; show me the glint of light on broken glass.  ~Anton Chekhov</p></blockquote>
<li><strong>Keep it simple</strong><br />
<blockquote><p>Vigorous writing is concise. ~William Strunk Jr.</p></blockquote>
</li>
<li><strong>Do it for love</strong><br />
<blockquote><p>Write without pay until somebody offers to pay. ~Mark Twain</p></blockquote>
</li>
<li><strong>Learn to thrive on criticism</strong><br />
<blockquote><p>You have to know how to accept rejection and reject acceptance. ~Ray Bradbury</p></blockquote>
</li>
<li><strong>Write all the time</strong><br />
<blockquote><p>Quantity produces quality. If you only write a few things, you’re doomed. ~Ray Bradbury</p></blockquote>
<blockquote><p>The way you define yourself as a writer is that you write every time you have a free minute. If you didn’t behave that way you would never do anything. ~John Irving</p></blockquote>
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<li><strong>Write what you know … or what you want to know</strong><br />
<blockquote><p>If any man wish to write in a clear style, let him be first clear in his thoughts; and if any would write in a noble style, let him first possess a noble soul. ~Johann Wolfgang von Goethe</p></blockquote>
<blockquote><p>Learn as much by writing as by reading. ~Lord Acton</p></blockquote>
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<li><strong>Be unique and unpredictable</strong></li>
<blockquote><p>I owe my success to having listened respectfully to the very best advice, and then going away and doing the exact opposite. ~G.K. Chesterton</p></blockquote>
<blockquote><p>Consistency is the last refuge of the unimaginative. ~Oscar Wilde</p></blockquote>
<blockquote><p>Zest. Gusto. How rarely one hears these words used. How rarely do we see people living, or for that matter, creating by them. Yet if I were asked to name the most important items in a writer’s make-up, the things that shape his material and rush him along the road to where he wants to go, I could only warn him to look to his zest, see to his gusto. ~Ray Bradbury</p></blockquote>
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		<title>Who or Whom . . . Me or I?</title>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 13 Jun 2009 03:01:31 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Mrs. Sandage</dc:creator>
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I found this post at writerbynature.com and I thought this was a good way to determine which to use &#8212; who or whom?
This is one of those tricky rules that if you get it wrong, it makes you sound stuffy or pompous, but every once in a while you run across a place where you [...]]]></description>
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<p>I found this post at <a href="http://www.writerbynature.com/2007/04/03/the-writing-life-when-to-use-who-and-whom/">writerbynature.com</a> and I thought this was a good way to determine which to use &#8212; who or whom?</p>
<p>This is one of those tricky rules that if you get it wrong, it makes you sound stuffy or pompous, but every once in a while you run across a place where you need to use the word whom, so I found this really helpful:</p>
<blockquote><p>Who/Whom falls into my <em>pesky words</em> category.</p>
<p>I spent years reaching for my style manuals whenever confronted with these words. Until I learned a couple of neat tricks.</p>
<p>In the past, I might have told you to use <em><strong>who</strong></em> when you mean the person taking action and <em><strong>whom </strong></em>when you mean the person is having something done to them.</p>
<p>But there’s an even easier way to deal with <em><strong>who</strong></em> and <em><strong>whom</strong></em>:</p>
<p>Try substituting <em><strong>him </strong></em>or <em><strong>he</strong></em> (her/she) for <em><strong>who</strong></em> or <em><strong>whom</strong></em>.</p>
<p>For example: Who/Whom do you admire?  Test: Do you admire him? Do you admire he?</p>
<p>Do you admire him? Is correct and as luck would have it, him and whom both end with the letter <em><strong>m</strong>.</em></p>
<p>Who/Whom broke the vase? Test: Him broke the vase. He broke the vase.</p>
<p>The answer: He broke the vase.</p>
<p>Try practicing with these sentences:</p>
<p>Who/Whom stepped in the mud?<br />
Who/Whom do you trust?<br />
Who/Whom is going to the concert?<br />
To who/whom should I address this letter?</p>
<p>Use this test when in doubt and you will be able to see whether <em><strong>who</strong></em> or <em><strong>whom</strong></em> is the right word.   <a href="http://www.writerbynature.com/">(~ jj_murphy The Writing Life)</a></p></blockquote>
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<p>I really like this, since I have always used a similar trick to decide when to use I or me when saying for example &#8220;My mother and I went to the store.&#8221; Instead of &#8220;My mother and me . . &#8221; If you can drop off everything and say I went to the store, then you would use the &#8216;___ and I&#8217; form. But if you say, for example &#8220;Give that to your father and I right now!&#8221; &#8220;Give that to I&#8221; doesn&#8217;t work, so in this case it should be &#8220;Give that to your father and me . . .&#8221; (I once had to correct the principal at the first school I taught at in front of my whole class because he came in and told them wrong . . . I don&#8217;t know why he was doing it to begin with, but wow! LOL talk about choosing my words carefully!)</p>
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		<title>The Story Bag</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 15 Apr 2009 03:03:05 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Mrs. Sandage</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[I went to a writing workshop a long time ago when I was teaching High School English. I don’t remember who it was that presented now (it was over ten years ago!) but there is one fun activity that I have used over and over again, with myself, my kids, the writing club that I [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I went to a writing workshop a long time ago when I was teaching High School English. I don’t remember who it was that presented now (it was over ten years ago!) but there is one fun activity that I have used over and over again, with myself, my kids, the writing club that I was the advisor for, my writing group . . . it turns out to be a very useful tool to get over writers block, and for brainstorming new story ideas. I have modified the activity a little over the years, but the idea is still the same. All you really need is a small notepad and a pen, or a computer, if you prefer. But you can make it even more fun with a little bag and a small object to represent each story. Here is how you do it — Get out your steno pad and your favorite number two pencil and make ten lists:</p>
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<li>Make a list of all the teachers you have ever had.</li>
<li>Make a list of all of the teachers you have ever had who were not at school or who did not carry the official title of “teacher.”</li>
<li>Make a list of all the teachers you have ever had that are animals.</li>
<li>Make a list of all the teachers you have ever had that are objects or things.</li>
<li>Make a list of all of the strange or unusual people that you have known.</li>
<li>Make a list of any strange or interesting creatures that you have met or seen.</li>
<li>Make a list of all of the places where you learned something important.</li>
<li>Make a list of all of the interesting or unusual places you have been.</li>
<li>Make a list of any interesting problems you have faced, or any weird or uncomfortable situations you have ever found yourself in.</li>
<li>Make a list of any interesting, quirky, accidental, brilliant, or just plain stupid ways that you or other people you know have solved problems.</li>
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<p>Now publish list 9 to the internet with your name, address, and a photo of yourself. (Ha ha, just kidding)</p>
<p>If you like, you can add illustrations in the margins (this is a great excuse to doodle) Obviously some lists will be much longer than others, and some of these lists may be quite short, but each item on these lists is a story all by itself. It can get really interesting though if you choose a few from different lists, for example choose a setting from list 7; characters from lists 1, 5, and 6; a problem from list 9, and so forth.</p>
<p>Now, here is the next step, which is optional: get a small drawstring bag and choose a small object — a unique stone, a really small toy, a coin, a marble, slips of paper color coded for character, plot, and setting, etc. — to represent each item from these lists. Put all of these in the bag and then when you are having writers block, or just want to give yourself a fun writing experience, pull one out and write the story that goes with it. Or you can randomly pull out a few and mix it up a bit.</p>
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